With this page I'm looking for honest, constructive criticism of my work. Posts like "this is awesum omg yay" are cool and all, and appreciated, but don't really help me improve as a writer. What did you like, why did you like it? Anything you didn't like, and how could it be improved? Hell, just pointing out grammatical and spelling errors will help, as when you've stared at the same pages of writing for hours on end you tend to miss the small typos.
Also, tell your friends about this page! If you like my work, share it with others! I'd like as many people reading this as possible, because in the end it'll mean more feedback for me, which in turn will mean I improve a lot more.
You also never know what sorts of influential people could be reading.
Thanks for your time, and hope you enjoy what you see here.
Kisho
P.S. After browsing the "Mood" emoticons, I find myself endlessly amused how the "High" emoticon is under the category "Daily Needs". What sort of members does DA have, I wonder...





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Good to hear from you.
1g plz.. err.. I mean, post more please.
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Also hai.
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